By Adam R -
I've had my first poetry review published here.

Comments

Mom and Dad said…
Very impressive, Adam.

I liked the part about filling in between the words with black... and the metaphor at the end about the long legs and marathon. What is a bodega? It's not in my dictionary ... but it's old.
Dad
9:53 PM
Mom and Dad said…
Your review is so good, you could read it as one of your readings for camp!

ar2
9:59 PM
Adam R said…
Thanks guys, that's a good idea, mom. I just looked up bodega, and it turns out it means more than I thought it did. Not only does it mean "A small grocery store," as I expected, but also it is "sometimes combined with a wineshop."
4:48 AM
Leah said…
I'd love to hear the definition of your bodega Adam and Stephanie. I'm guessing it would be longer and more interesting.
10:04 AM
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